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Sometimes I wonder what's the point
Why am I even here?

I wonder why when all I do  
Is sit & cry these tears

I wonder why I’m always wrong
Why I can’t do anything right

I wonder why after all I work
I only end up causing a fight

I wonder why I even bother to try
I'll only screw it up instead

I wonder if you even know I exist
Or if this whole things in my head

I wonder if I just disappeared
Would you even think to care?

I wonder if I just never came back
Would you even notice I wasn't there?

I wonder, why I come crying to you
When you're the one who made me cry

I wonder, when it's time to leave
How I'll ever say goodbye...
©2003-2009 ~devilishlycrazy
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just some strange things i was thinking about...pretty shit but oh well

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:iconcapt-toenail:
very emo.
esp towards the end

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"The hardest part about doing nothing is trying to explain yourself to people burdened with a life full of somethings."
-Agnes
:iconbraceletsofsmoke:
:clap: well done. a very emotional poem. but you convey your feelings very well.
:iconarkaizer:
Lots of your emotion used in this poem, I like that. I think I'll :fav: this one.
:icondevilishlycrazy:
oh thanx you! :hug:

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normal people worry me :O_o:
:iconmech61:
Wow! great work peita! im amazed, you even stirred my heart with this poem and thats not easy lol! I felt your pain as you wrote it out so beautifully, I really like this one. Fav+ :) keep up the great work my friend, :hug: for you!

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Death Is Certain, Life is not-Unknown
:icondevilishlycrazy:
oh thank you so much! :hug: strange i actually wasn't too happy with how this one turned out but oh well lol

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normal people worry me :O_o:
:iconsuspended-soul:
I really like this one thers alot of emotion in it!! But one thing you really hafta stop doen.. underestimating how much your mates really do care about you!! Even if sometimes we dont exactly show it!! But great work!! :clap: Keep it up!:hug:

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Can't Cope.....
Don't Mope...
There's Hope...
Smoke Dope!!:weed::coke:
:icongscbw:
Nice, it's a great poem. Now I gotta watch you and peppermint for peotry :+fav:
:iconxxxbadkittyxxx:
aww...thats exactly how i feel right now. great job!

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